Damn, I don't know why you guys spend all your time making flashes that are worth a penny. You organized your songs you used in your flash well but as for your animations, it was literally like a rolling turd. Maybe if you can improve your artwork then overall your flashes y'all create would become better. Take my words, you'll need them for your future flashes. You continue like this then many people will blam your submissions (unless you guys vote for your own submissions as usual). Can you guys really make something decent for a change?...
Hey, looks good to me, kind of reminds me of "Diner Dash" but it's a little different from it; same concept, different layout and designs. :) The game kept me busy for a little till I finally grasped what I had to do to get everyone satisfied. Now that you submitted something like this, I'm sure the NG folks would like anything else beyond this. How about coming up with a hotel or even a pet store next time instead of a restaurant? Or even... Let's say... A school cafeteria where kids clamor for good food and environment. Anyroad up, keep your submissions going, it's probably the best for now.
This flash basically doesn't have anything that makes sense to anyone watching this. Come on, folks, I'm sure y'all can do better than this. And I agree to boringuy's comment. Just because you make things vulgar doesn't mean it's always funny, and I'll bet you'll all be giggling about this in the back, thinking you're ticking people off. Anyway, you need some improvements on your graphics. You drew things fairly well but not perfectly. We honestly don't look for perfection here at NG, we always look for something that seems like effort went in. As for the voice... Ugh.... Try to get some kind of a replacement for your voice actors or the flash will always suck. This is a spam, not a "comedy." As for the storyline, put some effort to it. I don't really think the last scene is actually "meaningful." Well, it must be meaningful to you all who think this crap's actually funny. If you want people to appreciate your work, put some soul to it. Again, KittyKrew, very disappointed...
All's been laid out quite well, especially your main menu. The graphics were superb, as your game being a "stick figure set." As for a little improvement towards your game to make it better, it'd be nice if you have some kind of a difficulty setting to challenge people's skills (which makes people motivated to do better and ADDICTED to your game). Also, as for your weapons, if you could add people's classical favorite, the bat, acid grenades to attack multiple enemies, and a chainsaw for close quarters combat would work. As for your graphics, I saw a very small thing there where when you use weapons (like guns) the bullet holes goes on the background, even when you're using grenades. It's like you only have to aim to the specific target to kill 'em. It would be better if the "realistic" environment was created, where you throw grenades and it rolls for a couple of seconds before explosion, or aiming specific parts of the body and decapitating them when using katana or other "cutting" melee weapons. Anyway, I had fun with this, and I would definitely want to see a better version of it. All my 5 was on this, but for the review, a 9. And try giving your game scripts a little more attention, just a little. Rock on!
Seriously, you clocks can do better than this. I've seen your other submissions and they were better than this. You are just trying to get some attention or what? Anyways, can't blame y'all after you put the word "spamalot." Just have some comments for you clocks, when you have Tim Curry falling off the mountain, I can clearly see the repeating pattern of replaying this 3 second or 4 second clip of him falling once. And I don't really see a point in your flash; can't you clocks come up with something better?
First, I should credit jimi7987 with the comment. I want to add to his comment. You know, the first thing that's bad about this flash is the fact that it's too big for some crappy flash like this. I thought maybe a few kilobytes would work. And when it comes to music videoes, you know how it is like: background music, some kick-ass animations or properly 'moving' things or people, or whatever, and the point you are trying to make. Think what you want to say when you make music videoes in the future because I am sure it will help you to realize some things.
Hey, it's kind of like "state of art!" From the beginning, the way you depicted love by actually coming up with an animation that perfectly makes sense! I don't know how to describe it, but the colors you used throughout the flash was very "fitting" to each framesecond. And same idea here as PVL mentioned, "The music was extremely well chosen and captured the art in a spectacular way that I feel in love with..." Good job, strive for the better! Vote of 5 and 10 stars, you deserved it!
Some good work with the flash there. I think it can be promoted for a new version of Discovery channel, because it was quite historically fitting, I must say. I gave you a 4 for the vote, but a nine here, because that's what you deserved. The movie wasn't that big to open. But now comes the comments; you could try to make those characters that appear to look a little different from the rest. Throughout the whole time (almost) the running swordsmen don't look too impressive as the movie goes on. Maybe you can work on the characters. But other than that, it was great. Why don't you edit it a bit more and make it better? Keep it up!
Hey, I think it was great, though I thought maybe you can add something so you can make this even better. First, I think you should get a nice background for your "Christmas tree." I could understand you putting the white background to have some kind of a "snowy" feeling but you could have tried a room or something. Also, your decorations were good enough, but you should add some more, other than just those. And maybe have a better song that would match this kind of genre?... Anyways, enjoy your holiday and keep it up!
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All 23 flash Reviews
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars July 6, 2010
... Dots, and more dots...
Damn, I don't know why you guys spend all your time making flashes that are worth a penny. You organized your songs you used in your flash well but as for your animations, it was literally like a rolling turd. Maybe if you can improve your artwork then overall your flashes y'all create would become better. Take my words, you'll need them for your future flashes. You continue like this then many people will blam your submissions (unless you guys vote for your own submissions as usual). Can you guys really make something decent for a change?...
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 4, 2010
Kind of looks nice to me
Animation was great but I think it could be much better
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 16, 2010
Interesting game...
Hey, looks good to me, kind of reminds me of "Diner Dash" but it's a little different from it; same concept, different layout and designs. :) The game kept me busy for a little till I finally grasped what I had to do to get everyone satisfied. Now that you submitted something like this, I'm sure the NG folks would like anything else beyond this. How about coming up with a hotel or even a pet store next time instead of a restaurant? Or even... Let's say... A school cafeteria where kids clamor for good food and environment. Anyroad up, keep your submissions going, it's probably the best for now.
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars June 15, 2010
Very.... I don't know... Just grow up..
This flash basically doesn't have anything that makes sense to anyone watching this. Come on, folks, I'm sure y'all can do better than this. And I agree to boringuy's comment. Just because you make things vulgar doesn't mean it's always funny, and I'll bet you'll all be giggling about this in the back, thinking you're ticking people off. Anyway, you need some improvements on your graphics. You drew things fairly well but not perfectly. We honestly don't look for perfection here at NG, we always look for something that seems like effort went in. As for the voice... Ugh.... Try to get some kind of a replacement for your voice actors or the flash will always suck. This is a spam, not a "comedy." As for the storyline, put some effort to it. I don't really think the last scene is actually "meaningful." Well, it must be meaningful to you all who think this crap's actually funny. If you want people to appreciate your work, put some soul to it. Again, KittyKrew, very disappointed...
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 4, 2010
Good job, need a lil' improvement I think..
All's been laid out quite well, especially your main menu. The graphics were superb, as your game being a "stick figure set." As for a little improvement towards your game to make it better, it'd be nice if you have some kind of a difficulty setting to challenge people's skills (which makes people motivated to do better and ADDICTED to your game). Also, as for your weapons, if you could add people's classical favorite, the bat, acid grenades to attack multiple enemies, and a chainsaw for close quarters combat would work. As for your graphics, I saw a very small thing there where when you use weapons (like guns) the bullet holes goes on the background, even when you're using grenades. It's like you only have to aim to the specific target to kill 'em. It would be better if the "realistic" environment was created, where you throw grenades and it rolls for a couple of seconds before explosion, or aiming specific parts of the body and decapitating them when using katana or other "cutting" melee weapons. Anyway, I had fun with this, and I would definitely want to see a better version of it. All my 5 was on this, but for the review, a 9. And try giving your game scripts a little more attention, just a little. Rock on!
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 28, 2009
Not too bad, not too good...
Seriously, you clocks can do better than this. I've seen your other submissions and they were better than this. You are just trying to get some attention or what? Anyways, can't blame y'all after you put the word "spamalot." Just have some comments for you clocks, when you have Tim Curry falling off the mountain, I can clearly see the repeating pattern of replaying this 3 second or 4 second clip of him falling once. And I don't really see a point in your flash; can't you clocks come up with something better?
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars November 26, 2009
Seriosuly....
First, I should credit jimi7987 with the comment. I want to add to his comment. You know, the first thing that's bad about this flash is the fact that it's too big for some crappy flash like this. I thought maybe a few kilobytes would work. And when it comes to music videoes, you know how it is like: background music, some kick-ass animations or properly 'moving' things or people, or whatever, and the point you are trying to make. Think what you want to say when you make music videoes in the future because I am sure it will help you to realize some things.
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 26, 2009
I swear, it's awesome!
Hey, it's kind of like "state of art!" From the beginning, the way you depicted love by actually coming up with an animation that perfectly makes sense! I don't know how to describe it, but the colors you used throughout the flash was very "fitting" to each framesecond. And same idea here as PVL mentioned, "The music was extremely well chosen and captured the art in a spectacular way that I feel in love with..." Good job, strive for the better! Vote of 5 and 10 stars, you deserved it!
Thank you, that means alot :D
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 19, 2009
Good job there!
Some good work with the flash there. I think it can be promoted for a new version of Discovery channel, because it was quite historically fitting, I must say. I gave you a 4 for the vote, but a nine here, because that's what you deserved. The movie wasn't that big to open. But now comes the comments; you could try to make those characters that appear to look a little different from the rest. Throughout the whole time (almost) the running swordsmen don't look too impressive as the movie goes on. Maybe you can work on the characters. But other than that, it was great. Why don't you edit it a bit more and make it better? Keep it up!
Thankyou!
Yes I agree with you totally and that is why I am currently designing more characters for the opening.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 11, 2008
Some suggestions...
Hey, I think it was great, though I thought maybe you can add something so you can make this even better. First, I think you should get a nice background for your "Christmas tree." I could understand you putting the white background to have some kind of a "snowy" feeling but you could have tried a room or something. Also, your decorations were good enough, but you should add some more, other than just those. And maybe have a better song that would match this kind of genre?... Anyways, enjoy your holiday and keep it up!