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... Dots, and more dots...

Damn, I don't know why you guys spend all your time making flashes that are worth a penny. You organized your songs you used in your flash well but as for your animations, it was literally like a rolling turd. Maybe if you can improve your artwork then overall your flashes y'all create would become better. Take my words, you'll need them for your future flashes. You continue like this then many people will blam your submissions (unless you guys vote for your own submissions as usual). Can you guys really make something decent for a change?...

Kind of looks nice to me

Animation was great but I think it could be much better

Very.... I don't know... Just grow up..

This flash basically doesn't have anything that makes sense to anyone watching this. Come on, folks, I'm sure y'all can do better than this. And I agree to boringuy's comment. Just because you make things vulgar doesn't mean it's always funny, and I'll bet you'll all be giggling about this in the back, thinking you're ticking people off. Anyway, you need some improvements on your graphics. You drew things fairly well but not perfectly. We honestly don't look for perfection here at NG, we always look for something that seems like effort went in. As for the voice... Ugh.... Try to get some kind of a replacement for your voice actors or the flash will always suck. This is a spam, not a "comedy." As for the storyline, put some effort to it. I don't really think the last scene is actually "meaningful." Well, it must be meaningful to you all who think this crap's actually funny. If you want people to appreciate your work, put some soul to it. Again, KittyKrew, very disappointed...

Interesting game...

Hey, looks good to me, kind of reminds me of "Diner Dash" but it's a little different from it; same concept, different layout and designs. :) The game kept me busy for a little till I finally grasped what I had to do to get everyone satisfied. Now that you submitted something like this, I'm sure the NG folks would like anything else beyond this. How about coming up with a hotel or even a pet store next time instead of a restaurant? Or even... Let's say... A school cafeteria where kids clamor for good food and environment. Anyroad up, keep your submissions going, it's probably the best for now.

Good job, need a lil' improvement I think..

All's been laid out quite well, especially your main menu. The graphics were superb, as your game being a "stick figure set." As for a little improvement towards your game to make it better, it'd be nice if you have some kind of a difficulty setting to challenge people's skills (which makes people motivated to do better and ADDICTED to your game). Also, as for your weapons, if you could add people's classical favorite, the bat, acid grenades to attack multiple enemies, and a chainsaw for close quarters combat would work. As for your graphics, I saw a very small thing there where when you use weapons (like guns) the bullet holes goes on the background, even when you're using grenades. It's like you only have to aim to the specific target to kill 'em. It would be better if the "realistic" environment was created, where you throw grenades and it rolls for a couple of seconds before explosion, or aiming specific parts of the body and decapitating them when using katana or other "cutting" melee weapons. Anyway, I had fun with this, and I would definitely want to see a better version of it. All my 5 was on this, but for the review, a 9. And try giving your game scripts a little more attention, just a little. Rock on!

Some suggestions...

Hey, I think it was great, though I thought maybe you can add something so you can make this even better. First, I think you should get a nice background for your "Christmas tree." I could understand you putting the white background to have some kind of a "snowy" feeling but you could have tried a room or something. Also, your decorations were good enough, but you should add some more, other than just those. And maybe have a better song that would match this kind of genre?... Anyways, enjoy your holiday and keep it up!

Ha ha...Perfect timing for a Saturday morning!

I came across your piece right now in the South Pacific, time's 9:20 am, Saturday, 9/24. Fits the mood out here, with the sun finally setting its light into rightful positions, getting people ready for another day. The variation control was perfect and I liked it. Can't think of any other songs that would be compared to yours, especially when the theme is on "Saturday Morning." A full 10 sir, along with a 5! :)

Good song! :)

I was about to give you a ten because it sounded almost perfect ;) but then... I came across a bit of a repetitive form of transition let's say...about every 20-30 second interval. The happy feeling flows but for some reason it seems to lack something. Something that would make the song unique..like a sudden change of note variations. I will hear the song one more time so I know what is really missing. But overall, a GREAT piece, and not in a matter of days or years will I be able to compose something like this. Good work!

Might consider jottin' down what y'all are singing

Good song I must say, though can't judge just by the song itself because I couldn't understand the lyrics. It would be best to at least give a picture of what the song is mainly about. That would improve the popularity of the song itself.